All was free in the open air...

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Hey everyone! Hope you are all doing well :)
I have another short story for you all since I am interested in publishing a few things (even if they might be in magazines) and I was hoping if some of you could read this short story, all was free in the open air.

Could you spare a few moments of your time and read this short story and reply with some constructive feedback? Tell me honestly how you feel about it and whether or not I need to add to it. Thank you again XD

All was free in the open air here @ my journal