Journey ~The Beginning~

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hi! i'm new in here, so, if there's any rules in posting please tell me.

i'm trying to write a story, please give out your critique after reading it.

here is the 1st part of the story

 

Journey ~The Beginning~

This is Flow Academy, which building is more like a 16th century of European castle than a school. Which considered as the best school in the town. 

Under the calm sky
Students of dormitory are walking lightly to start their usual day of school
Wearing the white colored uniform, gently they could feel the breeze. 
The sun, the trees, and the chatter of students welcome the day.
Though… there are differences on the student’s uniform.

 

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