A Fairytale

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Hello Everyone. I'm very excited about being here. I've been writing earnestly for about year, but have been writing off and on since I was twelve.
I tried my hand at retelling (sort of)  the fairytale Cinderella and I like bits and pieces of it but there's something off about it. I was hoping you all might take a look at it.

 

( Ash and Honey )