First time...

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Hi all...

So I have been writing since I was 8 years old but this is the first time I have shared it with people that DON'T have to be nice to me... not that I want anyone to be mean either. Constructive criticism would be appreciated though.

This is the start on a story I have been working on.

Let me know what you think :)  

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