thank you for the "great war" observation...it didn't even hit me! I've been posting my first drafts...unedited...but that's what you get...I always like people reading my raw stories...sometimes there are subtle things I end up cutting which readers love...
It needs work, but I love the story...and I'm amazed it came out of me.
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Date: 2008-06-06 01:49 am (UTC)It needs work, but I love the story...and I'm amazed it came out of me.
Thanks for the comment!