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2008-08-09 03:11 pm (UTC)
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This is a good character interaction. I like it. One thing I would suggest is to throw in one or two more details to intensify the characters or the setting - perhaps what the mother's outfit from yesterday was, for example.
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Date: 2008-08-09 03:11 pm (UTC)