Neverwinter Wood: Straight out of Neverwinter Nights? The video game?
Equipment: Again, it reads like something out of a video game, or D&D or any other paper/computer RPG.
I think you really, really need to go back and redo this, and get it away from the AD&D stuff that seems to be an overarching theme with your character.
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Date: 2008-10-17 07:12 pm (UTC)Neverwinter Wood: Straight out of Neverwinter Nights? The video game?
Equipment: Again, it reads like something out of a video game, or D&D or any other paper/computer RPG.
I think you really, really need to go back and redo this, and get it away from the AD&D stuff that seems to be an overarching theme with your character.