Feedback (not the Janet Jackson song)
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writers_loftA friend and I are writing a story that we'd like a bit of feedback on. Any kind of constructive input is appreciated, style, pacing, word flow, whatever. Keep in mind that these are drafts, and we're already aware we need to do some more tinkering.
The story is called Rules to Stay Alive When the Gods Are Fucking with Your Life. Seriously. Follow the fake!cut below.
( Rule No. 1 )
The story is called Rules to Stay Alive When the Gods Are Fucking with Your Life. Seriously. Follow the fake!cut below.
( Rule No. 1 )
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