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Hi Everyone :)
This is my very first post here...
and I enjoy writing alot! 
Here is just a small snippet of a story I'm working on currently :)
Please give suggestions~!!!!

Thanks Everyone :)

Any ideas for how it could continue?

 

I had my earphones plugged in my ears, the volume on full blast.  It was colder than I had expected for a mid-summer’s morning, but I didn’t seem to mind the chilly wind blowing against me. I was where I wanted to be, and I felt that it was going to be a perfect day; nothing could make me feel bad today.

 

I felt like I was acting a scene in a movie. A scene in one of those corny romance movies, where the girl was over the moon, caught in her overwhelming but beautiful love story. I twirled around, nearly tripping over my own feet, and then laughed at myself for being so “accident prone”. I felt silly, but I wasn’t allowing myself to care. I didn’t have a dreamy love story to be occupied with yet, but I was happy and as long as I didn’t care, I was going to have a swell time. I knew it already.

 

I settled down a bit, as I approached my new school. It was my first day at this unfamiliar school, and I wasn’t a tad nervous. My best friend goes to the school, so I was almost on hundred percent positive that I’d fit into this new environment straight away.

I was wrong.

 

It turned out quite the contrary. My “best” friend had her boyfriend and her “cooler” friends to spend time with, so welcoming me was obviously not a priority. I was the new girl no one knew and had already been known as unpopular, disliked, and a “freak”. That’s when I started to regret my change of schools. I looked at the ceiling, closed my eyes and demanded for a reverse of time. Nothing happened. 

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