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writers_loftI'm not sure if this is the right place to ask, and if it isn't then if someone could tell me where a good place to go to may be then that'd be great!
If it is, then I was just wondering if someone had the time to go through the first volume of a graphic novel I'm writing. I'm hoping to get it up onto the internet (so it's a web comic really) in about March next year. But I'm in need of someone giving me some constructive critism, just over whether the story and character works in general really. And whether the story flows ect.
It's only the first volume and I'm in the midst of writing the second. And obviously getting a good opinion on the first one, and whether certain bits need to changed ect.
It's a PDF file because I wrote it on CeltX and havent' worked out how to convert it into anything else just yet, and it's about 102 pages long. Which is read surprisingly quickly over my experiances of other people reading it!
Does anyone want to have a look?
If it is, then I was just wondering if someone had the time to go through the first volume of a graphic novel I'm writing. I'm hoping to get it up onto the internet (so it's a web comic really) in about March next year. But I'm in need of someone giving me some constructive critism, just over whether the story and character works in general really. And whether the story flows ect.
It's only the first volume and I'm in the midst of writing the second. And obviously getting a good opinion on the first one, and whether certain bits need to changed ect.
It's a PDF file because I wrote it on CeltX and havent' worked out how to convert it into anything else just yet, and it's about 102 pages long. Which is read surprisingly quickly over my experiances of other people reading it!
Does anyone want to have a look?
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Date: 2009-07-30 12:23 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-07-30 12:27 pm (UTC)Thanks.
Do you have an email I can send it to?
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Date: 2009-07-30 12:53 pm (UTC)Thanks.
Do you have an email?