Advice Please

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So I need you guys to tell me what you think about a summary for the book I'm currently working on.

Bree Valentine was just you aberage P.I. Until one day when working on a case she meets this guy who looks so familiar yet she knows she's never met him before in her life... Or so she thinks. A mysterious character shows up at her house and everything comes flooding back... That the man in the store was her high school heart throb.

And that he was a vampire. Soon her simple organized life gets thrown into a world of chaos a d confusion. Her cases lead her to more and more of the supernatural. Finally leading her to a place inhabited by vamires and a dark secret that nearly pushes Bree over the edge of the sane and insane.

Trying to flee from the secret she drives to her office only to have police arrests her and take her downtown. Prior to getting shoved in to an interrogation room one of her classmates fom her agency sees her and bails her out only to tell her that Trista -the one who was always there for her -had died on a mission that Bree had been called to as back-up.

Bree finally cracks and commites suicide only to wake up as a vampire. What will she do now that her suicide attempt failed? Will she still try to commite suicide or will she continue to run from all the death, lies, and secrets?

So tell me what you guys think? Too much information? Does it compell you to go and read it? Any kind of critique is welcome! ^.^

peace.love.happiness.

- Rosie