It also may help to tell us what the context for the pieces are, what these were written for, and who the intended audience is. The first one, for example, works really well as ad copy for a charity, but as a stand-alone short story comes off as kind of preachy and self-important.
Are these for an assignment? Are they stand-alone fiction? What is their purpose?
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Date: 2009-10-24 03:01 pm (UTC)Are these for an assignment? Are they stand-alone fiction? What is their purpose?