I should have read it more carefully before I posted it. It's okay if you don't like it, I don't mind that. I'm just trying to improve my writing skills.
Which part of the plot didn't make sense to you? My friend who I wrote it for read it and it made complete sense to her. 0_o
I'm not saying anyone is wrong of course, I'm just trying to work out what it is you're saying so I can edit it and hopefully make it better.
I agree that grammar isn't my strong point. I know that, that's why I'm trying to improve.
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Date: 2009-12-18 11:31 pm (UTC)I should have read it more carefully before I posted it. It's okay if you don't like it, I don't mind that. I'm just trying to improve my writing skills.
Which part of the plot didn't make sense to you? My friend who I wrote it for read it and it made complete sense to her. 0_o
I'm not saying anyone is wrong of course, I'm just trying to work out what it is you're saying so I can edit it and hopefully make it better.
I agree that grammar isn't my strong point. I know that, that's why I'm trying to improve.