The Pick Up Line Game #2

[aeriedraconia.livejournal.com]

We haven't played this game for a while.


The Pick Up line/Opening Line/First line Game

Post the first line of the main story or stories that you are working on.

Then, those of us reading them can reply with:
Does it or doesn't it make you want to read more?

And for the fun of it:
Guess the genre?
Guess what happens next?

Comments

[the-mome-wrath.livejournal.com]

The only light was that from the anorexic waning moon, barely enough to line the edges of the dark foliage with the barest edge of silver. Just enough to keep from tripping.

[vflower.livejournal.com]

Hmm... it's very descriptive and image driven but the line doesn't really tell me as the reader anything at all.

Genre: Fiction, mystery, or adventure

What happens: Not sure... the main character sneaks through something but what, we're not sure.