The Pick Up Line Game #2

[aeriedraconia.livejournal.com]

We haven't played this game for a while.


The Pick Up line/Opening Line/First line Game

Post the first line of the main story or stories that you are working on.

Then, those of us reading them can reply with:
Does it or doesn't it make you want to read more?

And for the fun of it:
Guess the genre?
Guess what happens next?

Comments

[vflower.livejournal.com]

Laura died at age twenty and no one really knew why.

[canaryh.livejournal.com]

I want to know why Laura died, but since you mention her and not the narrator, it's Laura that I'm interested in, and she's already dead.

genre: doesn't exclude any genre

what happens: the narrator tells the reader why nobody knows the reason for Laura's death

[mercury-hall.livejournal.com]

Want to read more: Yes.
Genre: Sci-Fi?

[starlight83.livejournal.com]

Want to read more: Yes
Genre: Horror/Supernatural
What happens next: Laura, as a ghost, decides to figure out what happened to her.