Sooooo, I have the beginnings of a story.. annnnnddd feed back would be AMAZING.

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OK, so I've been working on this story for a couple of weeks and i would really apperciate some feedback on it... um,  yeah. It's about a girl who sees basically a parellel universe in anything reflective, like.. mirrors, shiny tile, water.. stuff like that.. yeah. ok... oh yeah, i hate the first paragraph.. suggestions? THANKS! 

Oh, and it kind of stops in a random spot.. lol, that it i promise! ok please read! oh please oh please!

( Mirror Eyes )