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take10000.livejournal.comhi all - i just joined. this is my first attempt at a "short story", if you can call it that. i would love any and all criticism. thanks in advance.
( The coffee has long since cooled, but still she stirs, her glazed eyes revealing, again, that she is not here. )
( The coffee has long since cooled, but still she stirs, her glazed eyes revealing, again, that she is not here. )
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