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So, I'd like to briefly introduce myself before I post something.
I'm polkadot_cat. I'm an English major, and I've been writing mostly poetry for about six or seven years. I love the Beat Poets, Li-Young Lee, Spencer Reese, and Aracelis Girmay. Two of my favorite authors are Truman Capote and Kurt Vonnegut.
My favorite classes in college are the poetry workshops, where every week you're guaranteed thoughtful, in-depth, honest critique on your work. I have wildly improved as a writer thanks to those classes. However, over the summer, I don't have the luxury of that kind of feedback, so I thought I'd join livejournal and see if I could get some helpful comments.
The piece I'm posting here today desperately needs critique. Any and all comments and suggestions for editing this are welcome! I wrote it recently, and it certainly needs editing, which is why I'm asking for feedback. Thanks! :)
I'm polkadot_cat. I'm an English major, and I've been writing mostly poetry for about six or seven years. I love the Beat Poets, Li-Young Lee, Spencer Reese, and Aracelis Girmay. Two of my favorite authors are Truman Capote and Kurt Vonnegut.
My favorite classes in college are the poetry workshops, where every week you're guaranteed thoughtful, in-depth, honest critique on your work. I have wildly improved as a writer thanks to those classes. However, over the summer, I don't have the luxury of that kind of feedback, so I thought I'd join livejournal and see if I could get some helpful comments.
The piece I'm posting here today desperately needs critique. Any and all comments and suggestions for editing this are welcome! I wrote it recently, and it certainly needs editing, which is why I'm asking for feedback. Thanks! :)
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