Poem: No Climbing

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This is a much-edited incarnation of a draft I posted here a little while ago.  All comments and critique welcome!

( No Climbing )

starman

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Hai thar. So, about six weeks ago, I posted this short story about two characters called Parker and Anthony, and a certain tragedy that befell them. Some of you may actually remember this. I've decided to revisit those characters. I wanted to do something where I wrote various "vignettes", if you will, about them at different points in their life, some simply for character development, and others for a deliberate story-telling purpose. ANYWAY, long story short, here's another part. All comments are welcome! :)

Also, I know the title and some stuff are a bit odd. I was listening to nothing but David Bowie while I wrote this, and I think it had a bigger influence on the piece than I had anticipated!

This has also been cross-posted to my personal journal, my writing journal, and a whole bunch of comms. I'll stop rambling now.

(2,076 words, if you're wondering.)


( starman )