Proluge and First chapter

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Thanks to those of you that can offer any helpful advice or criticism.  I look forward to reading your comments.

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Proluge

When I look back on my life in the previous months, everything seemed so trivial. It was almost as if I had been forced to look through a tunnel, preventing me from seeing what truly was amiss in those early days in the Bubble. Not that everyone was completely disillusioned from the devious workings of the Council. I saw, we all saw, what went on despite the strict barriers separating the societal classes. The council tried desperately to paint veils of peace and happiness over our eyes, and ensure us that we were being protected, but I firmly believe now with every fiber of my being that we all were imprisoned until death instead. The imprisonment itself done out of fear, loathing, and superstition of what the future could hold for any one human being. The fear of what lay outside the Bubble and what it meant for Man Kind should we all be exposed.

 

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Writing Exercise

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something I do often to help free myself of writers block, and help inspire a new direction for my current work in progress.  Let me know what you think.

 

( Writing Exercise: Expressions )