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Hello.  I am very new to this community and have recently started writing my own book(?)  I would really love some feedback on it.

The story is about a man who is kidnapped and has to fake his own death but doesn't want to hurt the girl he is planning on marrying, his high school sweeheart.  While he has 'dissapeared,' she thinks he is dead and falls in love with one of the cops who is working on her boyfriends dissapearance.  When three years after they have burried 'his body,' he starts leaving her hints that he might still be around.  She gets suspisious of this and starts doing her own investigating.

I'm not sure if thats the direction I will end up going with but its where I want to go.  The story is kind of long already.  I broke it down into the days so it doesn't seem so long.  Thank you so much for reading and feedback, thoughts, ideas, anything would be awesome!!!!

( February 7th, 2011 )