Original Fiction|TOUCHED: The Sword

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Been working on an original fiction called Touched. It's going to be a trilogy and you can read 26 chapters of Book 1: The Sword in HERE. Hoping for some new readers or fellow readers to get some new input. Book 1 is finished and I am currently revising and editing it now while I'm working on book 2: The Saint for Nanowrimo.

Hope you guys drop in and tell me what you think. Thanks!

Place Name Picking

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hi everyone,

im doing nano and in my story theres a place that i originally named Deaths Valley, but then i read a really good book that had that place name and when i googled it i found that theres alot of places named that(i realise that the name would be common) so i re named it Deaths Glen.

I dont mind either name i just need help picking one, any opinion would be greatly taken