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One of my many writing attempts...Not my best because my cousin wrote most of this...I just edited it so yea...I did some parts of it



Prologue
Now it is the year 2004. Our powers has increased from level five to eighty-eight. We also increased our individual skills. Now I’m ten years old. Zardek is eight. Hugh is now seven. I don’t take the responsibility of the oldest like Bob did. Zardek has taken the responsibility for now. My new power includes: moving things with my mind, multiplying, energy blast, agility, freezing, heat vision. I will tell you the rest but I will get old. Zardek’s power includes: multiplying, energy blast, Fire bolt, and more. Hugh’s new power includes: mind control,wave of light,and more.




Chapter 1
The message
Hi Zardek. I said. Hey Paris. He replied. What are you doing Zardek? I said. I’m making a poison. He said. Oh. I replied. Have you seen Hugh around? No. I replied.DEMONS! Hugh said when coming in. The twit is in the building. I said. A little help please. Hugh said. They are weak, Zardek and I said at the same time. Well there is four of them.
Hugh replied
Zardek frowned and said, there is four of them and what do they look like? They look alike red with horns. Hugh replied. No it cant be the Krenglin Clan they died out years ago or did.... Zardek what is wrong? Paris questioned. There used to be this clan of demons that would attack without mercy in groups over running entire kingdoms they were called the Krenglin Clan they were defeated by a of wizards lie to us but if the rumor is true... Zardek replied. What rumor? Hugh asked. Paris also frowned. The rumor that the son of the leader was spared by the wizards believing no harm could come from him but then maybe..... MAYBE WHAT! Hugh demanded an answer. Calm down. Zardek said. My goodness your like a rabid squirell. Paris snickered. The thing is the demons you saw may be the ones to deliver te message to the new wizards that they have returned but the only way that could happen is if the son of there old leader found the Book Of Darkness. Whats the book of darkness? Hugh asked calmly. The book of darkness is an instruction guide on how to lead the Krenglin clan and stop us from stopping him! Zardek replied sadly. If this is true let us go we must go and recieve the message.




Chapter 2
Four demons
We all walked in the manor and saw them. The largest approached Zardek and said. You are the leader am I correct? Yes. Zardek replied. My master wanted me to give this to you. The large demon said as he handed a note to Zardek. I snatched the note from Zardek and read it. It stated that he was our great foe because of our ancestor killed his father two-hundred years ago. After they handed us the note, they vanished. Wow, something that our family did long ago is hunting us now. I said. I now. Zardek replied. How can he live for two-hundred years? Hugh ask. He's a demond so he can live forever, you moron! I yelled. You didn't have to yell. Hugh yelled back. What was that Hugh. I said. I picked up an object and through it at Hugh.

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I'm going out. Said Hugh. Where to. I said. Over to Amanda's. Hugh replied. Oh, over your girl friend's house. Zardek said. Amanda is also a witch. Hey, Zardek want to call our ancestors from the other side. I said. Yeah, sure. Zardek replied. Off to the book, I said.
We both chanted,

COME TO US OUR FAMILY
GIVE US THE POWER TO SUMMON THEE

Great Grandma Helan? we said. Yes, you did call right. She said.Yeah, we replied. Okay, what did you want to ask me. She said. Do you know how our ancestors beat the Krenglin clan? We asked.

I'm not allowed to tell you yet. She Replied. Thanks for the help. Zardek said gloomily I cursed the demons as Zardek pondered something unknown to me. I suddenly felt a breeze and the messengers were back. I smiled What is it now? I said angrily.Our leader will attack tonight they said then they were gone.Damnit! I said aloud There toying with us! The bastards Zardek get over here! I said and Zardek walked over. What is it He said obviously angry from being roused from thought.Those demon bastards were just here they said they would attack tonight but why would they tell us...? I said. then Zardek instantly replied They are over-confident and believe we only have three people. But we do have three people I said No we have six people Me You Hugh Amanda and her parents! Zardek replied.




Chapter 3
The first attack
We spent all day getting ready. Oh my god can they hurry up with this I am not getting any younger, I said. Your ten, just wait until you are one hundred ten. Amanda's Mom Replied. Hey Hugh and Zardek, want to come with me to get the vile of potions. Yes, said Zardek and Hugh. Should we be with them when the Krenglin clan attacks. Said Hugh. Well we made the strongest potion and we have to get it. I replied. Yeah great point, said Hugh. Now let's get going said Zardek.When we came back from getting the potions, we came back to a disturbing site. Oh my god, oh my god. Hugh said. They are all dead, I said Those Bastards! Zardek said angerly. Then five of them came. Quick throw the potions! said Zardek. It worked, I said. But, their are more. Said Hugh. Energy Blast, Wave of Light, and Fire Bolt. We said at the same time. That took care of them, I said. Hugh started to cry. Zardek, come over here. I said. I'm coming, Paris. Zardek said. We should leave him alone for a while. I said. I now, Zardek replied.




Chapter 4
Mourning
Zardek, how is Hugh? I ask. He is upstairs in his room. Zardek replied. Should we check up on him? I ask. No, Zardek said. When is the funeral? I asked. Tomorrow.Zardek answered. We have to ask the more skilled witches to put up barriers. I said. I will do that. Zardek said. Hugh finally came downstairs. Amanda wanted to be creamated and then put in her family shrine. Hugh said. Why the shrine? I ask. She was going to be a priestess. Hugh said. Oh o.k. I Replied. Are you going to be the shrine keeper? I ask. No. Hugh answered. Then who will it be? I asked. One of her family members is going to do it. Hugh answered. Well, I have to go get a tux. I said. I have to get one too.Hugh said. I'm back, Zardek said. Do you need a tux? I ask. Yeah, I do. Zardek answered. Hugh went back to his room and Zardek and I are in the living Room. Hey, Zardek. I said. Yeah. Zardek said. I have this idea. I said. What is it then? Zardek said. It is to make weaponds and things like that. I answered. Oh, that is a good idea. Zardek said. I have a three way communicator that almost looks like a watch. I said. That is so cool, can I have one? Zardek ask. Yeah sure. I said. I will give Hugh one in the morning. I said. Do you sense Something? Zardek ask. No. I answered. Why do you ask? I ask. I know the source likes to convert or kill witches at times like these. Zardek answered. Then off to Hugh's room. I said. Hugh, we have to gard you tonight because Zardek sensed something evil. I said. Can't you defeat it so you two can leave me alone? Hough asked. Yo shut up before I break a blok of wood over your head. We're here to protect you! Zardek said. Do you want me to come with you? I ask. I don't know because someone has to be here with Hugh. Zardek said. Wait a moment. I said. What are those? Hugh ask. Zardek want to explain or should I? I ask. I would do it. Zardek said. They are crstals that acts like a cage. Zardek explained. Let's but it around his bed.
I said. Do you sense anything? I ask. No, wait I do. Zardek answered. Which direction? I ask. Every where! Zardek said. As soon as he said that dozens of demons appared. Most of them went to Zardek. AHHHH! Zardek said as an explosion of light surrounded me and him we felt a surge of strength and knew some new power's mine is Flame choke. Zardek's new power is solar explosion . I have to go to bed. I want to look my best. I said. Go ahead, I will continue killing demons. Zardek said. After I went home and he was done, he got another two powers. Zardek's new powers include corupted beam and Hellfire . Zardek next time when we go in battle can I kill some of the demons. I said. Maybe. Zardek said.I mean I am the strongest. Zardek said proudly. For now I whispered .I heard that! Zardek bellowed. Lets tally up then. I said. Fine Zardek replied. Hmm it comes out to me Level 92, you level 89, and Hugh level 88.
Zardek said. We meet Peter, Zardex, and Frank again at the funeral. How are you holding up? They ask. Me and Zardek are doing fine, but it is Hugh that is not doing well. I said. Hugh do you want to say a few words. No, I do not know what to say. Hugh said. Ok, then I will say something. I said. "Today we say goodbye to great and what could have been great to the magical community. My cousins and I was the last to see them alive. They died trying to defeat a great foe that we do not know it's weakness". I said.




Chapter 5
Revenge Attacks
It is time to attack their strong hold. Zardek said. When do we attack? I ask. I do not know. Zardek replied. If I stay all night I can have the ship ready, I said, if I have help it could be done in five hours. I said.Then I will help. Zardek and Hugh said. Hugh were did you come from? I want revenge. Hugh said. Ok. we said. Then it will take two and a half hours. I said (two and a half hours later) Everything is done. Zardek said. So now we attack, right. I said. Now we attack. Zardek said. Hugh get the book. I said. Why do we need? Zardek said. You will see, I said, but we don't really need it. We have to go now. Zardek said. So do we know where their hideout is? I ask. In LA. Zardek said. You are talking about Los Angeles? I ask. Yes. Zardek answered. That is on the other side of the country. I complied. I know. Zardek said. So who will be the captain? I ask. I will. Zardek said. Ok. I said. So how long will it take us to get their? Hugh ask. About fourty-five minutes. I said. Hugh here take this. I said. What is it? Hugh ask. A three way communicator. I answered.(45 minutes later) Zardek, keep driving. I said. Hugh take the second attack area. I said. I know. Hugh said. I can not do it. Hugh said. Then, take the defense. I said. I put my hands on this panel on the wall that kills demons on the other side and said Energy Blast. I killed thirty demons and gained three more levels. My new powers include Plasma Blast, Lightning Bolt, and Transformation. Now let's get out of here. I said. Hugh, do you want to be captain? Zardek asked. Yeah, sure. Hugh answered. Zardek I think we are even now. I said. For now. Zardek said under his breath. I heard that Zardek. I said. Well like it matters I could just go pick some fights at the demon clubs even though I could simply walk in and I would get jumped. Zardek said. True but I could do the same....I said. Zardek disappears. Damn it! I said. (At the demon bar)Well here I am...Zardek said. He walks in and slams the door shut then locks it. The sound alerts the demons they send six to the door and Zardek uses his Solar Nova to blast them dead and through the walls. He walks forward and into sight range of the demons. All of them run to him as soon as they saw. He punhes one so hard in the face it dies instantly. Kicks another in the chest causing it to spit up blood and die. Then he uses his Corrupted Beam to kill six more (It jumps from person to person). He then uses more karate like swinging his foot around the demons face and slamming it into the ground or flipping a demon in a circle and breaking its face with his elbow. He used a Solar Nova twice and it was all over. He gained five levels. His new powers are Flaming Roundhouse Capoiera Down Genga.Wow that was like...taking life from a baby....Zardek said.




Chapter 6
Hiata, Who!
Zardek came home. Were the hell were you Zardek! I said. I was at a demon bar. He replied. For three hours. I said. No, I was over a friends house. He said. When you were out I found something in the basement. I said. Then let's go. He Said. They are amulets. I said. What do they do. He said. They are protection amulets that every person in our family that uses magic gets. I said. Did you make them? Zardek asked. No, they are passed down from fromer generations. I answered. There are three. Zardek said. Oh theres a blue one with my name on it. I said. Then I will take the green one. Zardek said. Then Hugh will have the red one. I said. Where is Hugh? Zardek asked. He is sleeping and I think we should do also. I said. Fine, we'll go to bed. Zardek said. now that i'm inside my room I will teleport to the book. I said to myself.

When I got to the book, There was a lady. Who the hell are you? I ask. I am Hiata. She answered. Who? I ask. Check the book. She said. Lady, your not in the book. I said. WHAT! She yelled. I'm a very important demon. She said. Yeah Sure. I said. Want to settle this out side. She said. Sure, let me just tell you this, i'm going to destroy you. I said. She threw an fire ball but my amulet blocked it. Plasma blast. I said. It hit her. Bang bang, I shot you down. Bang Bang, you hit the ground. I said when she was being destored. I gained five levels and got no new powers. What no powers! I yelled. What a weak demon. I said. Well there is nothing to do but sleep. I said to myself. Good morning, Hugh said when he woke me up. Well you are in a happy mood. I said. I moved on. Hugh said. Hello, weaklings. Zardek said. Did you check the channel that has the results. I said. No. Zardek said.




Chapter 7
100 and Grinia
Zardek turned on the tv and that channel. We are even! He yelled. So what. I said. I wanted to reach one hundred. Zardek whimpered. What if we both do it at the same time. I Suggested. What do you mean? Zardek asked. I mean that both of us can fight one demon and both of us will get what we want. I answered. But, I want to be the first. Zardek said. Well I want to be first too. I said. Is it a deal. I said. Fine, it's a deal. Then lets find a demon. Zardek said. Why don't we whait because they will come to us. I said.After waiting for five hours a demon finally came and her name is Grina. Hello road kill. Zardek said. I see Hooters. I said. Well I see two dead witches. Grina said. She threw two energy balls at us but, once again the amulets blocked it. we said plasma blast and Flame Choke. She deflected it! We said. We need a distraction. I said. Hugh get out here. Zardek Said. What. Said Hugh. Plan B. Zardek said. Do you think that three of you can destroy me. She said. While Hugh distracted her Zardek and I snuck up behind her and said plasma blast and Flame Choke. No, No! How could I be destored by the three of you. She said when deing destored. We gained four levels. We surpassed one hundred. I said. Maybe we are special. Zardek suggested. We gained three more powers. My new powers are flame choke, blizzard, and posion claws. Zardek's new powers are Detect,Destructive Kick,Block. Hugh's new powers are Fire Wheel,Dropkick,Sinister Blaze. The levels are Paris and Zardek are at 101 and Hugh is at 98.
(Its not done)

Date: 2008-10-11 01:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] odette-river.livejournal.com
Can you put this under a cut, please?

Date: 2008-10-11 04:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gnomenapper.livejournal.com
It's been asked, but I wanted to reinforce the sentiment: LJ cut please.

Date: 2008-10-11 04:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aeriedraconia.livejournal.com
Hi [livejournal.com profile] tyler_a,
This is kind of a long post. If you would, please slip everything after your prologue behind an lj-cut to keep everyone's flist from exploding.

Cheers,
Your Friendly Neighbourhood Mod

Edited 'cause I can't do HTML tonight. Hee. Twice, even.
Edited Date: 2008-10-11 04:40 am (UTC)

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