Update on Gemsinger

[flamingruby.livejournal.com]

Thank you all for the feedback--I'm going to probably delete the equipment list out of the profile and work on finding ways to make it seem more book-like. I haven't done too much world-building this weekend because of a real life emergency.

To-do list this week:

--Revise some place names
--Write out a detailed description of Sekiya (I can't draw a map, so a very detailed description will have to do)
--plan out the races and what they are like
--plan out some history

Comments

[flamingruby.livejournal.com]

Yeah, that would make drawing the map so much easier