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[davien.livejournal.com]

I need a volunteer (or group of volunteers) to read two segments of prose and review them or tell me which one is preferred. 300 words or less. Just a segment.

I would prefer to share privately rather than post. Any volunteers?

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[beautifvl-flaw.livejournal.com]

I don't pretend to be an expert, but I'd be happy to help.

[el-spiritous.livejournal.com]

sure I'll volunteer. just post and I'll read

[el-spiritous.livejournal.com]

sure I'll volunteer. send it to me via message I guess would be the best way