The Pick Up Line Game #2

[aeriedraconia.livejournal.com]

We haven't played this game for a while.


The Pick Up line/Opening Line/First line Game

Post the first line of the main story or stories that you are working on.

Then, those of us reading them can reply with:
Does it or doesn't it make you want to read more?

And for the fun of it:
Guess the genre?
Guess what happens next?

Comments

Pick up line game

[jennyharker.livejournal.com]

"Sex is the subject of today's sermon," announced Father Miguel Inez.

Re: Pick up line game

[starlight83.livejournal.com]

Want to read more: Yes!
Genre: I have no idea. YA?
What happens next: Everybody is uncomfortable and, hopefully, a very amusing and enlightening sermon on sex!

Re: Pick up line game

[jennyharker.livejournal.com]

The genre is mainstream fiction. What happens next is an amusing and unexpected scene played out from the view of a character who thinks out loud during Mass.

Re: Pick up line game

[mercury-hall.livejournal.com]

Want to read more: For sure!
Genre: Slice of life? Or that weird Young Adult thing again. XD

Re: Pick up line game

[jennyharker.livejournal.com]

The genre is Mainstream or could be Action/Adventure, Mystery, Gay/Lesbian, Humor, take your pick. The following humorous scene is viewed through the eyes of the main character who has the unfortunate habit of thinking out loud.

Re: Pick up line game

[jennyharker.livejournal.com]

I will post the scene on my blog at jennyharker.livejournal.com

Re: Pick up line game

[artierayne.livejournal.com]

I would most absolutely love to read more of this. Now that is the sort of line that really grabs a person's attention. Bravo!