The Pick Up Line Game #2

[aeriedraconia.livejournal.com]

We haven't played this game for a while.


The Pick Up line/Opening Line/First line Game

Post the first line of the main story or stories that you are working on.

Then, those of us reading them can reply with:
Does it or doesn't it make you want to read more?

And for the fun of it:
Guess the genre?
Guess what happens next?

Comments

Re: Pick up line game

[artierayne.livejournal.com]

I would most absolutely love to read more of this. Now that is the sort of line that really grabs a person's attention. Bravo!