He saw her in the rain
Nov. 22nd, 2009 07:27 pm![[identity profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/openid.png)
Hey all, I know I haven't posted here very often but I do write and I do pay attention. I am currently trying to improve my writing skills so I would appreciate it if some of you could read this short story I wrote recently. I know it's not a great piece, it's more philosophical than anything, but if you could give me some constructive feedback that would be wonderful.
Thanks again! :D
he saw her in the rain...
Thanks again! :D
he saw her in the rain...